Wednesday, 2 June 2010

Just wrote a 'song'?

Thought I'd post, cause if anyone wants to feedback, they can.


This is what I have so far:

When life seems dark, all hope is gone
it takes so much to lift a song
When doubt closes in and I'm struck by fear
Lord, I know you're still near.

You're near, still near
Your mercy remains
You're near, still near,
You give strength as I wait
You're near, Lord, so near
Your love endures forever

Though it's been so long
since I've heard Your song
I will wait, I will wait
For I know You are near
Still so near.....


I know the second bit needs work, and it needs to resolve, I want it to be like being lifted from something dark into the glorious light.. I'll edit and post this later..